cool story. I really liked the first person perspective you had with Jason in the intro. I really felt like you captured his character quite nicely. I also enjoyed that you focused more on Felicia than Peter. It was interesting getting to see things through her eyes and how she felt about Jason’s leaving her.
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Date: 2009-04-24 10:08 pm (UTC)