Beautiful! I loved how you captured Peter's sense of wonder at seeing Hogwarts for the first time. I know that's pretty difficult to do, considering all JKR had to do was describe it. Fanfic writers have to go around their elbow to achieve the same effect! Very good job!
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Date: 2008-09-01 11:01 pm (UTC)